I’ll give you some good advice and tips in order to get high marks x
-Use a range of adjectives (words that describe)
-Use a range of idioms
-Use a range of rhetorical questions (questions which you don’t expect/need an answer)
-Use alliterations. Example- big blue bus. (These are words which start with the same letter at the begging)
-Include correct grammar and punctuation
-I hope this helps! Good luck x