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Read the paragraph below carefully and answer the question that follows.

(1) My name is Maddox Smith. (2)I am the Treasurer of the San Marcos High School Charity Club. (3)We're having a canned food drive. (4)This event is going to be off the hook and raise lots of dough for the homeless peeps. (5)It's just two weeks away and I am writing to ask for your help. (6)The Charity Club is planning to place collection boxes for canned food items at various local stores. (7)We'd love it if you would allow us to place a bin at Shop Mart. (8)All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food bank to be sent out to local families who are really, super poor.

Which of the following would be most helpful in creating a more formal and professional tone?

A mentioning the request sooner
B better explaining the purpose for writing
C eliminating the informal language
D just removing the contractions
E all of the above

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20-06-2016

All of the above. You must fix any informal words like "peeps. " Contractions like "we'd" need to be changed to "we would." Also, people lose attention quickly, so state early your purpose to keep them listening/reading. In addition, elaborating the purpose would clarify any questions the reader has.

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