what is wrong with the quotation in this example?

Answer: Letter A. The paragraph begins with a quote, which takes away from the writer's control.
Explanation:
When there is the need of presenting information to the reader in an unaltered way, there is the possibility yo use quotation marks to denote the begining and ending of such quote, this could be considered however as a way in which the writer loose some sort of control over the narrative of the story.