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Even though the vultures are an important part of our ecosystem they can be scary when in there committees. At one point in virginia,there were upwards of 100 vultures in a neighborhood trees. Clearly, this many of them can cause serious problems. As one can see, committees of vultures can cause problems. In a virginia neighborhood, the vultures dropping cause paint to chip from cars. They also like to chew on slof and rubbery items. One resident says,”at first, I did not mind that the birds were roosting up in the trees, but then I realized that my car paint was being damaged by the birds.”It’s not just the cars that they are damaged though, the weight of a committee of vultures in trees causes the trees to die. Clearly, something need to be done. Obviously, there a need to find some ways to protect both the vultures and the neighborhoods. Since vultures are protected by law, they can not be killed but anyone can do some things to make them move out. One effect thing is to use a firework to scare them away from the trees. Putting wires on the roof to prevent them from landing is another way to deter them. In the long run these solutions might be just is needed for the safety of vultures and the neighborhoods. Write a good conclusion

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When constructing a conclusion, it can be difficult to know where to begin.  One good thing to keep in mind is to know where not to begin.  What your conclusion should never do is introduce any sort of new information.  The conclusion should serve to wrap things by summarizing what has just been said and/or reiterating the topic.  In looking at what you have written, it seems you already have a conclusion as your last sentence provides a bit of a summary of the remedies.  One thing you might consider in order to make your conclusion stronger is to, perhaps, reiterate the importance vultures have in the ecosystem because this is how the paragraph begins.  One way of doing this is as follows:  “Because vultures are a vital component to our ecosystem, the importance of non-lethal remedies cannot be stressed enough; therefore, in the long run, these solutions might just be what is needed for the safety of vultures and the neighborhoods.