HELP ASAP! I need these 3 to pass & I'm confused on them
1.Which of the following shows the most effective dialogue ?
- John, you are ill; we have to get you to the Good Samaratian Hospital to save you
- John, how I'll you appear! what shall we do ?
- John, you look sick. what's wrong ?
- John, as I'll with the flu you are, driving to Mexico seems highly unreasonable
2.In writing dialogue, try to avoid
-using quote marks
-using dialogue to "show" with specific quotes
-using dialogue to show what characters say
-using both dialogue and narrative to say the same thing
3. One revision technique is to;
- cut out sections that use consistent point of view
- cut out sections that develop characters too fully
- cut out sections that move more slowly than other sections
- cut out sections that do not have anything to do with the story