One revision technique is to

A) Cut out sections that use consistent point of view
B) Cut out sections that develop characters to fully
C) Cut out sections that move more slowly than other sections
D) Cut out sections that do not have anything to do with the story.

Not sure which one it is. Maybe D?

Respuesta :

This is definitely D, as having sections that have nothing to do with the story is very distracting to read.
Hope this helps!