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Kristin completed her introduction to her literary analysis of syntax and diction in Ernest Hemingway's short story "The Old Man and the Sea." Read her introduction. Then answer the question that follows.

[1]According to the Rolling Stones, "You can't always get what you want." [2]Life is full of disappointments, some of which feel as though they are too much to bear. [3]Literature often reflects this truth and teaches us that sometimes there is a triumph in the struggle, even if it is unsuccessful. [4]In this essay, I will explain how Hemingway makes effective use of short syntax and monotonous diction to evoke a mood of empathy in The Old Man and the Sea.

Which sentence in Kristin's essay should be revised for errors in formal tone and academic language?

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The sentence that should be revised for errors in formal tone and academic language in Kristin's essay is sentence 4.

How do you write in formal tone?

There are several things to keep in mind when writing in formal tone or academic language and one of them is to avoid the use of personal pronouns such as "I" and "me."

Kristen used the person pronoun, "I" in the fourth sentence which goes against this guideline and so the sentence should be revised for that formal tone error.

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Answer:

Sentence 4

Explanation:

I got it right on the test.

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