Respuesta :

I'm not fully sure on how to help, however here is some suggestions:

you should give a background knowledge on your 1st paragraph and give your claim on gun violence. If your claim is against guns, state that in your 1st paragraph. For your 2nd paragraph give evidence to support your claim, give details on how guns are harmful, give examples on what way. For your 3rd paragraph explain how the evidence fits with the claim.

good luck! :)

write a claim for ex (do you think gun safety is important? i think gun safety is important because..2 examples)

first para (in my opinion i think gun safety is important because….give a example an explain why… i also think gun safety is important because..give another ex an explain why)

3rd para ( in conclusion i think gun safety is important because it..put both examples an say why there important)
an your done really only one paragraph that’s important