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Which is the best way to revise this sentence for clarity and brevity?

Although others have described New York City as exhilarating because of its culture and culinary delights, I found the metropolis to be awash in detritus, while also offensive to the olfactory sense.

New York is very exciting to many people, but I found it boring.

I don’t know why people love New York so much. I don’t like it.

Some people love New York, but I found it to be dirty and smelly.

New York City is not worth visiting because it smells bad.

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Though others have described New York City as exhilarating because of its culture and culinary delights, I found the metropolis to be wet and dirty, Also it had bad smell.

New York is exciting to many people, but I found it boring.

Why do people love New York so much. I don't like it

Some people love New York, but I found it to be nasty and stanky.

New York City is not worth visiting because it smells bad.

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