why teens should be able to play dangerous sports intro paragraph

instuctions... to write the introduction to your argument. Write three or more complete sentences. Remember to include:
Overview: provide general information about your topic
Explanation: describe why your issues is controversial
Claim: present your stand on your issue that excludes all personal feelings and the pronoun “I”

my planning sheet : claim :teens playing dangerous sports is helpful because it gives physical advantages.



Reason 1: dangerous or extreme sports are great stress relievers.
-evidence- ‘’By taking up an extreme sport, you can develop a better response to stressful situations. This is because undertaking an extreme sport will increase your body's production of an amino acid called neuropeptide Y. This amino acid helps with regulating our anxiety and is also a natural sedative.’’

Reason 2: dangerous or extreme sports help improve your overall health and physique.
-evidence- ‘’ the fitness required for an extreme sport means you will work different muscle groups compared to the gym, as well as improving your stamina, strength, and flexibility. In addition, extreme sports can also help you lose more fat compared to your standard fitness routine. ‘’

Source: 4 Compelling Reasons Why You Should Take Up an Extreme Sport.

Counterclaim : Teens playing dangerous sports is threatening and they should not be able to play them.

rebuttal : even though there are dangers for teens playing dangerous sports it is a great alternative for teens.
-evidence- ‘’If your teen is in recovery or is consistently turning to unhealthy activities for a dose of adrenaline, then enrolling them in an extreme sport might be a better source for them. …’’

Source: https://www.teenrehab.org/resources/helping-your-teen/extreme-sports/

please help and write an orginal answer im really behind and need to get this done!!