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Well do you have a source to help you? In a PEE paragraph you need at least one quote to support your points. Assuming you have a source, pick a point for and against the statement 'does school kill your creativity' and discuss the point, use a quote that supports this view. Then, move to a different view.
So, the first paragraph would be that school DOES kill your creativity. The second would be that school DOESN'T kill creativity. And explain each one. You could include your opinion too.
So, the first paragraph would be that school DOES kill your creativity. The second would be that school DOESN'T kill creativity. And explain each one. You could include your opinion too.
For this, you should have two statements. One of them is "School DOES kill our creativity," and the other is "School does NOT kill our creativity". Pick one and go on from there.
In my personal opinion, I believe school DOES kill our creativity because school doesn't allow the kids to come up with their own ideas and be unique. We don't get to choose what classes we want to learn in or what we should do in the classes. Of course, what we should do in the classes SHOULD BE on-topic such as math, English, History, etc.. We're all taught the same thing in the same way every day. We don't get to combine 20 molecules to create something new, we just get to do what the teacher tells us to do.
Yes, there are times where in Science classes, you get to create your own volcano or whatever, but that's not unique. Everyone makes their own volcano every year, and it's not fair to us that we have to make SPECIFICALLY a volcano. Why can't we create something like a mini UFO that is hung by wire and a crane-like object? We don't get to do that, we get to make the classic VOLCANO.
There's also Art, which allows a bit more creativity and teaches you how to be creative, but the teacher is still telling you what to do and how to do it. Clay models of animals or people, paintings of specific a specific scenery, 3d art, etc..
We can't keep going on like this forever. We need to be able to show HOW creative we can get instead of being robots like the rest of the world.
