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Read the excerpt from Dwayne’s letter to his principal about the school’s uniform policy.

I believe that high school students have the ability to follow a dress code; therefore, making us wear uniforms is ridiculous.

Which is the best revision of the underlined portion of the sentence?

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He should change "ridiculous" to "unneeded" or "Unnecessary"  or something more respectful like that. :)

The best revision of the underlined portion of the sentence would be:

I believe that high school students have the ability to follow a dress code; therefore, requiring us to wear uniforms is unnecessary.

Why does text needs revision?

Revision to a sentence is done to improve the text, especially regarding structure, language and referencing. Sometimes, texts need to be restructured to gain precision, focus and readability.

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