raine1204 raine1204

13-12-2016
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opinions on my essay?
i can message you the prompt and speech if needed, but i really just want opinions instead of corrections or proof-reading.
much appreciated.

opinions on my essay i can message you the prompt and speech if needed but i really just want opinions instead of corrections or proofreading much appreciated class=

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loreng02 loreng02

13-12-2016

The second sentence is a bit disjointed and run on.
What tense is this supposed to be in?
Florence is not alive so why did you say a woman who agrees with this instead of agreed?
Great word choice!
Where is the conclusion?

Overall, I love the word choice and quotations, you could just fix a few minor details. If you need me to look over it again when you finish just pm me. Good luck!

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