Read the sentence. The baker donated bread to the fund-raiser in a large box. Which is the best revision of this sentence? In a large box, the baker donated bread to the fund-raiser. The baker donated to the fund-raiser bread in a large box. The baker donated a large box of bread to the fund-raiser. In a large box, the fund-raiser had bread donated by the baker.
The prepositional phrase "of bread" establishes that the large box donated by the baker contains bread . Therefore, it is unnecessary to use the PP. So the baker donated a large box of bread tho the fundraiser.
