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Many children now insist on owning a mobile phone. I do not believe that buying a mobile phone to children is a good idea for three reasons. The mobile phone negatively affects children's social life, it distracts them, and they may get abused.

First of all, the mobile phone negatively affects children's social lives. They might spend all their time playing on the phone and neglecting to spend time with their family and friends. 2 Moreover, they might even hate going out to the park and prefer to stay home, playing video games on their phones. For all that , mobile phones are not good for children's social life.

Secondly, mobile phones might distract children from studying. They spend all their time playing on the mobile phone without studying. Moreover, many children get addicted to mobile phones and then neglect everything else in their life. Mobile phones are very distracting to children.

Thirdly, children may get abused. They might get calls and messages from older people who abuse them. Added to that, they can connect to the internet and view websites that are not suitable for their age. We should protect our children both from the internet and from getting abused.

To sum up, I think that we should not buy mobile phones for children. They are young and need to be active and play around instead of playing on a mobile phone all the time.​