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Kimberly Peirce is an American filmmaker born on September 8, 1967. When Kimberly Peirce made Boys Don't Cry two decades ago, she created the movie as a labor of love. But the small, independent film became a surprise hit and cultural touchstone. one that established Peirce as a director and helped shape a national conversation about gender and identity Influence society for human and civil rights. Kimberly a proud Governor of the Academy of Motion Pictures and head of the Diversity Committee, an Executive Board member of the DGA, and a founding member of ReFrame, an industry-wide effort to end discrimination. against women and people of color.