essay ( Everyday Heroes )
What change, if any, should be made in
sentence 5?
F Insert a comma after blood
G Change desperate to desperately
H Change needs to needed
J Make no change

What change, if any, should be made in
sentence 8?
A Change According to Acording
B Change the semicolon to a comma
C Change needs to need
D Make no change

4 What is the most effective way to revise
sentence 11?
F Also, whenever there is a devastating
event, the need for blood can become even
more critical, this happened with the
terrorist attacks on September 11, 2001.
G Also, there is a devastating event and the
need for blood can become even more
critical whenever there are terrorist
attacks, such as on September 11, 2001.
H Also, whenever there is a devastating
event, the need for blood can become even
more critical. Such as the terrorist attacks
on September 11, 2001.
J Also, whenever there is a devastating
event, such as the terrorist attacks on
September 11, 2001, the need for blood
can become even more critical.

What change should be made in sentence 19?
A Change have to has
B Change serious to serrious
C Change diseases to disease’s
D Change past to passed

What revision, if any, is needed in
sentence 20?
F After the interview you’ll sit in an
armchair, it was specially made for people
who are donating blood.
G After the interview you’ll sit in an
armchair. Which was specially made for
people who are donating blood.
H After the interview while you’ll sit in an
armchair for people who are specially
made for donating blood.
J No revision is needed

The meaning of sentence 21 can be improved
by changing it to —
A them
B some
C your arm
D your blood

What change, if any, should be made in
sentence 14?
A Change require to requires
B Change than to then
C Delete the comma
D Make no change

What change, if any, should be made in
sentence 16?
F Change you to yours
G Change will be to was
H Change confedential to confidential
J Make no change

Which transition word or phrase could best be
added to the beginning of sentence 23?
F Soon
G Likewise
H For example
J However

What change, if any, should be made in
sentence 24?
A Change the first feel to fell
B Insert a comma after woozy
C Delete but
D Make no change