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HURRY PLEASE! Read the body paragraph from an argumentative essay on Louisiana’s economy.

1) Some may say that the state’s economy is not growing as fast as it should. 2) However, people who believe that are dum. 3) There has been an increase in jobs in the private sector in recent years. 4) Also, the income level for Louisiana’s workers has improved across the state.

What would be the best way to revise sentence 2?

Change it to a more respectful tone.
Add a transition to connect the ideas.
Fix the spelling and punctuation errors.
Add vivid imagery or descriptive details.

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Answer:

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Explanation:

Some people may say that our state’s economy is not growing as fast is it should be, however i believe otherwise. I believe differently because over the recent years, there has been an increase in jobs, and in the private sector. Going along with that, the income level for Louisiana’s workers has improved greatly across the state.

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A - change it to a more respectful tone