Nicky wanted to be a better soccer player. She practiced dribbling the
ball around cones. She passed the ball back and forth with her dad.
She also practiced taking
penalty shots.
Which answer option best revises the passage by using a variety of sentence
structures?

A. Nicky wanted to be a better soccer player, so she practiced
dribbling the ball around cones, and she passed the ball back and
forth with her dad and she also practiced taking penalty shots.

B. Nicky wanted to be a better soccer player. She practiced. Dribbling
the ball around cones. Passing the ball back and forth with her
dad. Taking penalty shots.

C. Nicky wanted to be a better soccer player
She practiced dribbling
the ball around cones and she passed the ball back and forth with
her dad. She also practiced taking penalty shots.

D. Nicky wanted to be a better soccer player. She passed the ball
back and forth with her dad. She also practiced taking penalty
shots. She practiced dribbling the ball around cones.