Respuesta :
Jil was not only very ill from not gettin no sleep she was over weight from a bad diet
The faulty parallelism in the given sentence can be rectified by adding the word 'also' so that it makes a meaningful sentence.
What is faulty parallelism?
Faulty parallelism arises in a sentence where it is observed that there is an error in it which makes it vague to read.
The revised sentence would be as follows:
''Jill was not very ill from lack of sleep, he was also malnourished from a poor diet.''
Therefore, after putting 'also' in the sentence before the word malnourished, the faulty parallelism can be easily corrected.
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