Please retype this sentence by changing the parts that are italicized The list of the italicized words are on the bottom in the order in witch they appere.

When I was, oh, around eight years old, I thought it would be fun to learn to play the piano. My parents agreed to purchase a piano. They told me that I would be required to practice one hour a day, due to the fact that piano lessons were expensive. At first, I practiced piano for two hours each day, with the result that I progressed very rapidly. Every day for two years I raced home when school was done and practiced the piano with great enthusiasm. Then one day, something happened. I decided I liked baseball better than the piano. Though I can play the piano rather well at the present time, I do not practice as long nor as diligently as I once did.

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When I was,oh at the age of around eight yours old.I thought it would be fun to learn to play the piano.My parents agreed to purchase a piano.They told me that I would be required to practice one hour a day,because piano lessons were expensive.At first, I practiced piano for two hours each day, and had started to increase because I progressed rapidly. Every day for two years I raced home right after school was finished and practiced the piano with great enthusiasm. Then one day, something happened. I decided I liked baseball better than the piano. Though I can play the piano rather well right now I do not practice as long nor as diligently as I once did.

anthougo anthougo · Answer 2 · 2022-04-29T13:25:33+02:00

A rewriting of the sentences by changing the parts shows that the italicized phrases can be changed as follows:

1. About

2. Because

3. As a result

4. At ... the end of

5. Currently

What is a rewritten sentence?

A sentence may be re-written to achieve clarity, brevity, efficiency, and effectiveness.

A rewritten sentence changes its structure to eliminate redundancy.

For example, the paragraph above can be rewritten as follows:

"When I was, oh, about eight years old, I thought it would be fun to learn to play the piano. My parents agreed to purchase a piano. They told me that I would be required to practice for one hour a day because piano lessons were expensive. At first, I practiced piano for two hours each day. As a result, I progressed very rapidly. Every day for two years I raced home at the end of school and practiced the piano with great enthusiasm. Then one day, something happened. I decided I liked baseball better than the piano. Though I can play the piano rather well currently, I do not practice as long nor as diligently as I once did."

Thus, after rewriting the italicized words in the sentences, the words in the paragraph were reduced from 126 to 120.

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