Have you ever tried kayaking? You could explore local streams and lakes. Or
you could take your kayak out on the open ocean. You are paddling along with
the breeze in your hair. You might want to do some fishing from your kayak. One
thing is for sure: You wouldn't want to forget your flotation device!
Which revision corrects the inappropriate shift in verb mood?
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You would paddle along with the breeze in your hair.
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Paddling along, you feel the breeze in your hair.
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is the breeze blowing your hair while you paddle?
You paddled along with the breeze in your hair.
