The selection below contains redundancy and needs to be revised. To correct this, all underlined word(s) should be deleted from this passage EXCEPT

I opened and read the report you sent yesterday about our need for updated computers. I pretty much agree that it needs a thorough review from a technology expert and budget manager before we make any unnecessary luxury purchases.

A) opened and

B) technology

C) pretty much

D) unnecessary selection below contains redundancy and needs to be revised. To correct this, all underlined word(s) should be deleted from this passage EXCEPT I opened and read the report you sent yesterday about our need for updated computers. I pretty much agree that it needs a thorough review from a technology expert and budget manager before we make any unnecessary luxury purchases. A) opened and B) technology C) pretty much D) unnecessary

Respuesta :

To correct this, all underlined word(s) should be deleted from this passage EXCEPT

B) technology

Explanation:

The selection does contain redundancy and errors that needs to be revised.

Redundancy of words is evident when the can be omitted out of a statement and the statement would mean the same thing, without even a change in the grammar of the sentence.

This is happening here in the case of all the other words which means that the sentence is full of redundancy. However the information conveyed by the line about technology expert is important and has to be kept in.

Answer:

The answer on USATESTPREP is B

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