Does this look good and if so can i have some pointers and tips

You have now read and listened to three speeches. Choose any two of the speeches, and identify and evaluate the specific strategies used to persuade the audience. Be specific and use textual evidence from the speeches as support. Consider elements such as rhetorical devices, tone, emphasis, and pace.
Make sure to use three vocabulary words in your writing.
Your answer should be 2–3 paragraphs long.

I think Lincoln used guilt in his address. I think he used guilt and he also used honor. We wanted to honor the soldiers that have fallen. I think he also used remorse because he did not want the war to happen and all those men to die. Basically he used emotional texts to let people know the people died on both sides and we should honor the soldiers that had fell.

I also think that King used guilt to let people know they were wrong. He had used some allusions in his speech. He had used some of Lincolns speech to let people know how the blacks felt and people should treat them better. His pace was fairly moderate and really serious.

In the first paragraph there is a kind of explanation about how things go on in war time. And all the paragraph used emotional phrases (language figures) to emphasize the people feelings about many soldiers died at both sides of the war.

In the second paragraph is about an specific situation (Kings arguments to make people know that they were wrong) also using Lincoln speech. So we can consider serious and the pace fairly moderate.