So i'm writing a poem for English and I wanted to know if this is good?
Feeling
I can’t seem to breathe
You don’t have a clue
I can achieve
Anything
when I’m with you
I don’t know this feeling
But with you they start revealing
When I’m hurt you pop out of nowhere
And make the pain disappear
Only you can make me happy
I like how you are classy
Maybe it’s this teen thing
But it turns out you were apart of a silly dream

(at first it was supposed to be about being underwater, but since it's Valentines day, it turned into love.)