Answer:
When revising a narrative essay, the writer should include sensorial details that allows the reader to see, small, hear, feel and taste what is going on in the story.
Explanation:
"Use all five of your senses to describe the setting, characters, and the plot of your story. Don't be afraid to tell the story in your own voice.
[...] Effective narrative essays allow readers to visualize everything that's happening, in their minds."
Reference: Roane State Community College. “Types of Papers: Narrative/Descriptive.” Roane State Community College, 2019,
