Phoebe is supposed to ensure that Marika, a freelance graphic designer, is sent a tablet computer at her home address so that she can review some
educational games. Phoebe sends her coworker Antwon an IM to coordinate the delivery. In which three ways does Phoebe's message fail to follow
professional standards for instant messages?
Phoebe
Hi. I'm feeling really tired today. I've been busy trying to get my house
ready for out-of-town visitors.
Anyways, did you get the tablet computer delivered to that freelancer named Marika?
She will need to review those educational games we signed off on last week.
It's important, so please send it if you haven't already.
By the way, I heard Marika is our supervisor Peter's first cousin.
That explains why he chose her over Linda, even though Linda is so much more talented!
Sigh. OK, got to go now.
Oh, one more thing. Marika is available Monday to Saturday, except Tuesdays
between 1 and 6 p.m. Keep that in mind when arranging the delivery.
It contains spelling errors.
It uses inappropriate emoticons.
It mentions important details at the end.
It fails to mention the main request
It contains complaints about coworkers.
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