The resolution of "Safety of Numbers" emphasizes the theme that traditional paths toward success are necessary, but
taking risks is also an essential part of growing up. In the story, the narrator's mother is obsessed with making the
narrator study and plan for college. The narrator eventually gives in, noting, "If it makes her happy, I will play by the
rules" (78). As she explains, "the SAT is to my future as my future is to Mom's past" (77). In other words, she realizes
that her performance on the SAT will play an important role in how her life plays out. Despite this realization, the
narrator does not completely accept the idea of always playing it safe. On the day of her exam, she reveals that after
the test, she will sneak out the back door and head to New York City on an adventure with her best friend. She knows
she will be punished, but notes, "I'm not scared of getting in trouble. What I'm scared of is growing up to be scared"
(82). Put another way, she is afraid of who she will become if she lacks the courage to take some risks in life. Ultimately,
the narrator's decision to strike out on an adventure immediately after taking the SAT reveals the theme that it is
necessary to both play it safe and to take.

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