Many arts, including painting, fiction, poetry, and theater, made the Harlem Renaissance special. However, music holds a special place in its history. Black artists developed new styles of music such as jazz. Featuring a new style of piano playing, jazz was a refreshing take on an old sound. Jazz began to attract many new fans.

Review the model paragraph. How many of the same revisions did you make?

the answer is I made some of the same revisons.