Valentina wrote a novella about a woman unintentionally falling in love with a baker while her husband was away at war. Although Valentina’s editor complimented the raw emotion that comes across in the story, he wants Valentina to rewrite much of the dialogue to vary the length of the lines. What is MOST likely the issue with the dialogue in Valentina’s novella?
A.
It is broken up by too much description.
B.
It does not provide enough context.
C.
It does not make clear who speaks which line.
D.
It is too repetitive and all sounds the same.