Can someone re write this and make stronger points?


This is about why phones improve teens lives.

> Communication is what teens should focus more on when using their phones. Phones help everyone communicate with their family, friends, and strangers anywhere in the world. Interacting with people is more facilitated especially for introverts who can build their social skills more easily. The world keeps in touch through various platforms with the help of social media. Teens can communicate to each other and improve their social skills with the help of a phone.<

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