I NEED FREAKING HELP!!!!!!
Summarize the story’s primary action in several sentences, and identify


the climax. Name several word groups the author uses to keep the


action connected from one paragraph to the next.


Showing and telling are crucial to effective storytelling. What does


Hoffman show us in paragraph 7, and how does this affect the suspense


in the story?


What do you think the meaning of this story is for Hoffman, and


where in the story does he make this clear?


If you think the introductory paragraph is effective, what makes it work?


Look especially at the first sentence. Write out the thesis sentence.