hello can someone help me to say it differently? it got rejected "I’ve been holding in a lot of guilt these last couple of years after grandpa died. You have always told me that I need to be honest with myself and those who I love. Well, the truth is that I have not been very truthful with you at all. We get together every Sunday to eat and play games, and we always get to talking about the future. I know we lightly joke about how much I look up to you, and how I hope that one day I will be as great of a father to my children as you have been to me. But truthfully, I am scared that you will not be around to meet my children. I know that you still smoke a pack of cigarettes a day, and it makes me afraid for your health. I smell the lingering smoke on your breath when I go in for a hug. Dad, I don’t want to tell you how to live your life or make you feel like I am judging you, I just want to be blunt with you; I know cigarettes are not healthy, I love you, and I want my children to know their grandfather. "